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雅思剑10满分范文的启示之一

发布时间:2019-05-21   作者:网络整理

  One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. (59)

  punishment does not have much of a role to play in this.惩罚不起作用;

  l Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel. 否定副词句首倒装(句式丰富的一个典型体现)

  MODEL ANSWER

  (2)选词方面更加考究细致,词汇难度有明显的提升。比如conscience良心,道德;reason情理,理性;entail导致;charge被监护人,detention课后留校。

  书接上回,在剑10(5.5分范文)里,我们看到了写作考试评分系统的升级。那么剑10满分的考官范文又意味着我们应该做出哪些努力呢?

  l Rather,=of course,=on the contrary

  新东方教师解析剑10

  l reason我们学过的基本意思是“理由(n),推理(v)”,但在这里它是“情理,理性(n)”之意,“Once the age of reason is reached”再次理解为“等他们到了懂事的年纪”。

  雅思考试评分标准对照表

  l 同意表达积累:consequence=outcome=result

  编辑推荐:

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. (81)

  (1)逻辑链接依然是写作的重点,而且明显出现比较地道的以前不太常用的衔接手段,比如rather=on the contrary转折关系。

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  To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behaviour. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones- an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel. (78)

  语法方面:

  Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.(倒装)惩罚不应该残酷/严苛cruel=harsh;

  l such as detention, withdrawal of privileges, and time-out举例论证充分合理(“detention课后留校,withdrawal of privileges特权收回,time-out惩罚”)Did you ever get a time-out?你有被罚过么?

  if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature就算惩罚有必要,也不应该是体罚;

  l 注释:conscience=moral sense

  l 同义:tell right from wrong=learn the difference between right and wrong=distinguish right from wrong

  (3)词汇语法准确多样,比如consequence=out come=result in; punishment=sanction=discipline=time-out。

  综上,

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